Monday, January 15, 2024

World Gone, Chapter 8: The Slow Crawl

It's finally here, my friends. The exciting eight chapter in my novel, and the return of the man from the first chapter; Harold. Things aren't going well for Harold, as you will soon see. I hope he's okay, but even I don't know. Enjoy the chapter!

This is probably not the coyote from the story, but it might be. 

In the eerie stillness of the pre-dawn darkness, Harold found himself slowly emerging from the clutches of unconsciousness, his struggle evident as he gingerly opened his eyes. The symphony of pain reverberated through every inch of his body, casting a shadow over his disoriented mind. As he grappled with the disconcerting sensation, a fog of sickness clouded his thoughts, leaving him in a state of bewildered contemplation.

"Where am I?" he pondered inwardly, his mind attempting to cut through the fog of discomfort. With each passing moment, he summoned an immense effort to clear his thoughts and piece together the fragments of his memory. Slowly but surely, the recollection of events began to unfold before him.

It took a moment, but the details rushed back with vivid clarity. He recalled the familiar hum of his truck's engine as he navigated the winding roads on his journey homeward. Then, an inexplicable phenomenon engulfed the world around him, rendering everything man-made invisible, and thrusting him into an abrupt and disorienting free fall from the space where his truck had once been. The vivid memory of that descent at a speed exceeding sixty miles per hour lingered, the intensity of the impact etched into his consciousness like a haunting refrain.

In the desolate aftermath, Harold lay sprawled on the unforgiving ground, his body a canvas painted with the stark evidence of his ordeal—bloodstains forming a grotesque tableau of his struggle. The passage of time seemed an elusive concept in this eerie realm of darkness, leaving him grappling with the unanswered question of how long he had been lying there, trapped in the merciless grip of unconsciousness.

When his truck seemed to vanish from around him, the world was slowly moving towards darkness. However, that dull, waning sunlight had since given way to a profound darkness, shrouding everything in a cloak of mystery. Harold, never adept at deciphering the celestial tapestry that was spread out above him, found himself at a loss, unable to discern the hour from the starry expanse above or the veiled sky that offered no clues to the passing of time.

Amidst this uncertainty, one undeniable truth persisted—pain, a relentless companion that hinted at the severity of his injuries. The agony pulsated through his every fiber, a silent reminder of his vulnerability and the potential fragility of life itself. Thoughts of mortality lingered in the recesses of his consciousness; he felt the looming specter of impending demise, a chilling realization that amplified the cold that enveloped him. 

Harold's gaze shifted downward, compelled to confront the stark reality of his altered existence. The space where his prosthetic leg once seamlessly blended with the contours of his body now lay empty—a painful void that mirrored the profound loss he had endured nearly a decade ago in a fateful car accident. That prosthetic limb had been more than a mechanical replacement; it had been the conduit through which he navigated the world, offering him a semblance of mobility and independence.

The passage of time had dulled the sharp edges of the memories associated with the accident, allowing Harold to, at times, create a mental barricade against the persistent reminder of his disability. Yet, in this harrowing moment, the absence of his prosthetic leg tore down that mental fortress, exposing him to the raw truth of his vulnerability. The label of "cripple" felt tangible, the weight of it settling upon him like an oppressive cloak.

As he lay there, one-legged and vulnerable, the unforgiving terrain beneath him added another layer of torment. Chunks of rock protruded from the earth, their jagged edges mercilessly stabbing at him—a cruel reminder of the inhospitable environment he found himself in. The pain, both physical and emotional, surged through him, intertwining with the harsh reality of his predicament.

Dying on the cold, unforgiving ground, Harold grappled not only with the imminent threat to his life but also with the profound depths of despair. In the solitude of his suffering, he couldn't help but ponder the unthinkable: if this was not the end of his existence, what depths of adversity awaited him? The mere contemplation of further tribulations intensified the anguish, casting a shadow over the already dire circumstances in which he found himself.

As he lay there, the frigid embrace of the night tightened its grip on his weakened form. Harold, not yet succumbing to the fatal bite of the cold, found himself caught in a paradoxical dance with mortality. The cold, though not lethal, seemed to seep into his bones, a spectral chill that mirrored the uncertainty of his fate. In the silent void, the passage of time became an abstract concept, marked only by the rhythmic cadence of his labored breaths and the palpable stillness that surrounded him.

Summoning reserves of strength he didn't know he possessed, Harold endeavored to hoist himself into a sitting position, the struggle evident in the grimace etched across his face. As he teetered on the precipice of uncertainty, contemplating his next move, a distant noise interrupted the stillness, a disconcerting presence lurking in the shadows of the unknown.

"Hello!" he called out into the enveloping darkness, his voice a tentative beacon seeking connection in the void. The echo of his own words hung in the air, met only by the eerie silence that seemed to stretch endlessly. Undeterred, he repeated his plea for acknowledgment, the desperation in his voice betraying the gravity of his predicament. Yet, the enigmatic entity, be it friend or foe, remained steadfastly silent, withholding any reassurance or threat.

Undeterred by the lack of response, Harold's gaze swept the landscape around him, a futile attempt to discern the source of the elusive noise. To his relief, his searching eyes settled upon a substantial tree branch lying just beyond his grasp—a lifeline promising both support and a potential means of defense. The daunting prospect of hauling himself toward it loomed, but the ominous silence from the unseen presence spurred him into action.

"Is there somebody there?" he ventured once more, the desperation now tinged with a hint of panic and frustration. The absence of a reply fueled his determination to reach the tree branch without further delay. Whoever or whatever lurked in the shadows had proven unresponsive, casting a shadow of suspicion over their intentions.

The night held its secrets close as Harold, with a measured resolve, initiated the arduous journey toward the sizable branch. Each movement sent screams of pain through his battered body, but the potential threat in the dark fueled his determination. The unknown awaited, and as he closed the distance to the tree branch, the questions that haunted his mind intensified—was salvation within reach, or did the ominous silence portend a more sinister twist in this harrowing tale?

Summoning every ounce of his will, Harold inched himself forward, each movement a testament to the unyielding determination that fueled his quest for the tree branch. In the dimly lit surroundings, a fleeting movement caught his attention from the periphery of his vision. At first, he dared to hope it was a figment of his exhausted imagination, a trick played by the shadows. However, as his eyes acclimated to the darkness, the unsettling truth unfolded—a pair of eyes, gleaming like twin orbs in the night, locked onto him.

With a sudden jolt, Harold's pulse quickened as he realized the source of the eerie gaze was a coyote, its presence revealed in the moonlit shadows. A primal tension hung in the air, the creature seemingly poised in a silent vigil, waiting with an evil intent. Never breaking eye contact with the watchful coyote, Harold summoned the last reserves of his strength to complete the agonizing crawl to the coveted tree branch, hopefully something that may ultimately save his life.

As his trembling hand clasped the reassuring solidity of the branch, Harold's relief was palpable. Yet, the unsettling stillness of the coyote persisted—it neither retreated nor advanced. The two beings, one human and the other wild, engaged in a silent standoff, the air charged with an unspoken understanding that transcended the immediate circumstances.

In a surge of desperation, Harold unleashed a torrent of shouted commands, his voice reverberating through the desolate night. "Get out of here!" he bellowed, the makeshift weapon in his hand swinging with a painful effort. "Go on, get out of here, you son of a bitch!" The coyote, an elusive silhouette against the darkness, held its ground, an inscrutable sentinel in the unfolding drama. It was as if it knew that Harold would make a tasty meal.

Time stretched thin, each passing second an eternity as the tension between man and beast hung in the balance. Then, as if the invisible threads binding them had snapped, the coyote pivoted and vanished into the obscurity from whence it came. Harold, his breath caught in the grip of anticipation, exhaled a sigh of relief. The immediate danger had passed, but the shadows seemed to linger, casting doubt upon the true nature of the encounter.

Physically drained from the adrenaline-fueled confrontation, Harold surrendered to the unforgiving ground, his body aching from the exertion. In the aftermath of the tumultuous encounter, he lay in the silence, his quiet prayers echoing in the vast emptiness, a fragile hope that everything would be okay in the uncertain journey that lay ahead.

Harold, despite his lack of religious inclinations, had never found space for a higher power in his life. However, there were moments when the act of prayer seemed to offer solace that transcended his rational beliefs. It struck him as somewhat paradoxical – if he didn't harbor a belief in a higher being, why would such a being extend its belief in him? Yet, in the chilling aftermath of an accident that left him lying in a narrow ditch where a road once existed, bathed in blood and shivering from the cold, Harold found himself grappling with excruciating pain and instinctively reaching out to a force beyond his usual comprehension – praying to a God he hadn't consciously acknowledged before.

As Harold uttered his desperate plea, he felt a compelling need to connect with a force beyond his comprehension. "God, or whomever you are, I implore you," he began, the urgency palpable in his voice. "Guide me back to my family, help me endure this nightmarish ordeal. I'm uncertain if this torment is confined to this desolate place, but if it extends further, I beseech you to safeguard my wife and infant son."

Amidst the throbbing pain that clouded his thoughts, Harold sought clarity. "I can't fathom your purpose in all of this, but it feels like you might need some kind of mental help. Whatever malevolence is at play, it's beyond sick and demented, even for a judgmental, and angry God." His prayer, a blend of desperation and defiance, echoed through the desolate surroundings.

He concluded his prayer as he always did, with an unwavering declaration of disbelief. "I've never believed in you, and I never will. No amen, no reverence. Just a simple plea: extend your aid to those in need." The words lingered in the air, creating an invisible barrier between the mortal and the divine, as Harold, fueled by determination, began the arduous journey homeward.

In the distance, a haunting howl sliced through the cold night air, sending shivers down Harold's spine. Unbeknownst to him, the source of the eerie sound lurked closer than he dared imagine, a sinister presence watching from the shadows, biding its time. The unseen observer, a specter in the darkness, awaited the unfolding of events with an amazing amount of patience. It was hungry, but it would wait.


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World Gone, Chapter 8: The Slow Crawl

It's finally here, my friends. The exciting eight chapter in my novel, and the return of the man from the first chapter; Harold. Things ...